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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 15:41
蓝色调子不太好吧，莺莺童鞋？

为什么？什么调子好？

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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 15:46
词牌格律
　　【定格】
　　上阕：中中平（韵），中中平（韵）。（此句后二字重复上句后二字）

谢谢斑竹指点，正在改进中。。。。。。

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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 15:55
蓝色底色偏冷吧？

与头像相配。红色火热看着心烦，蓝色清凉看着赏心悦目。

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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 16:00
蓝色不好看。用黑色？

嗯，马上就去撒它一地黑芝麻。{:soso__17945330743080313032_1:}

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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 16:05
好好好……捡回来做黑芝麻糊

撒完了，请电梯直达一楼捡回家做芝麻糊。

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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 16:11
太少……

{:soso__3529411147517619291_4:}多了凝凝要发飙。

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天涯 发表于 2011-8-21 16:16
盖住……发不了。

盖进土里，春天你就大发。