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[原创] 青杏一枝三两酒 |
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雨轩也是用新韵:)
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是,浮云游子意,落日故人情:)
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“近”可酌
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禅茶兄早:)继续挑个刺:茗为仄~~~
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多谢对与续。对联与诗词除需考虑平仄外,尽量以不重字为佳,特例除外。当然,当做打油也很喜感!
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