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[诗词漫步] 如梦令·春早 |
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恩,雪说好那就是好了,我原意是,春来时,柳条是必先发芽的,所以有欣欣向荣之意。
月河说“先生”二字拟人化,有情。这么一读还真有点。
谢谢雪的肯定,“先”字,改为“纤”,可好?
跟上次的七言一样,都是写的江景。鸭掌绿,“绿”字真好——“春草绿波,晓寒深处”~
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由英文字母到科幻大片!
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唉,天生聪明~~……令人发指~~~~
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雪呀,这下你可把俺甩远了: )
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