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[原创] 【对句接龙】龙年接龙(3) [有奖] |
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伯 舌是二声,古律为仄,今韵为平,出句中的伯用的是今韵,那么对句中的舌也只能用今韵,所以出律了。窃以为,可否把雀舌换成茶的别的雅称,比如清友
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客气了,呵呵
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妙句,一句漫览将静景点活,静中有动,动中有静,意境优美
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