浪淘沙

清湖柳烟

风雨山海关，醉倚雕栏。万里长城起波澜，何曾记往痴于怨。泪语当怜。沧海远无边，浪花飞溅。千里烟波久未见，抬望只遇俩行雁。隐入云端。

新竹

个人还是固执且武断的认为 柳烟的词比诗好 呵呵 词是好味道~~

清湖柳烟

新竹姐姐： thank you for your fantastic comments and you great help in guiding my skills in writing poems. It is a great honor to know you, however, maybe I have no chance to see your true looks and  express my gratitude to you in person

小糊涂仙

就不敢回了。

对竹子的万国文骂还是褒奖？

新竹

新竹姐姐： thank you for your fantastic comments and you great help in guiding my skills in writing  ...
清湖柳烟 发表于 2011-7-8 14:44

幸好 幸好 凭着俺有限滴英语 好歹看了个大概懂{:1_251:} 柳烟不用客气 有空常来玩儿 开心就好{:1_268:}

黄山松

呵呵！出律太多了，{:1_264:}